Saturday, September 24, 2016

The Suicide Man - short story

The Suicide Man
By Christopher Michael Carter

He cried tonight, like he has every night this week.  A week of crying himself to sleep; the first time in a long time as his disease has just about neurologically stripped his ability to do so like an average person of thought & emotion.  He's quietly fought depression for years but even then he's always been less than honest about having suicidal thoughts.  They've changed and the manor they've done so has been beginning to frighten him.  It's no longer simply a matter of wishing he were dead, but actual methodical blueprints of his end.  He lies in bed planning it down to the letter as one would a grand heist, meanwhile his wife sleeps beside him without a clue that anything's awry.

He believes "it", the push to end his life, used to scare him but these days it all feels different.  When it hits, he feels like crying, but it's actually comforting.  He'll wait for her to fall asleep and then looks at his medicine cabinet loaded with the dailies and thinks about taking everything he can and just quietly go to sleep as if it were a normal night.  He's not sure if he's fighting the urge or working up the courage to actually do it.  The thought that it can all be over whenever he wants is kind of reassuring, freeing.  He thinks about how he wouldn't have to be bitched at about the most inane things.  He thinks about how he wouldn't have to feel so worthless, powerless, alone, and in the way.  He thinks about no longer being sad.  No longer being angry.  No longer feeling unworthy.  He thinks about no longer having to live or deal with his illness.  He pictures his wife happier without him as well as his child no longer having to put up with a piss poor father figure such as himself.  Perhaps his wife and child wouldn't be so irritated or complain as much if he weren't around.  He's anxious to feel relaxed and not overstretched in any way.  Yes, all he'd have to do is take too much of something that's already long in his system.

Every night like clockwork he thinks about the freedom it would bring him.  His eyes water, his smile stretches, and the lump in his throat swells.  In the midst of the euphoria that the visions of suicide brings him, another image is sharp: his dog, the little black pup.  If this man thrives on the feeling of dying then one could easily say this pup thrives on being lively.  His youthful bounce and boundless energy are only matched by the way he stares up at him with those big doe eyes.  This man loves his dog and, more than any other living being in his life, he wonders if that love is understood or even reciprocated.  Alas, he is constantly reminded by others that he's just an animal, a beast beneath him.  'If he's so beneath me,' the man ponders, 'Why is it that I'm the one wondering if he sees me as I see him?'  

The man plans to end his suffering with precision planning but the wind has vacated his deathly sails by the innocent eyes of the little black pup.  He thinks of his wife, 'She'll be fine.  I don't think she'd even notice my being gone.'  He thinks the same of his daughter currently away at college, 'Eh, they'll get over it quicker than they'd portray.'  But the dog; this Hound of Joy if you will...  'This damn dog keeps ruining the death of a lifetime.'  This man wants to be free.  Doesn't want to be a failure.  The mere thought of the dog, this man's best friend, breaks up his beautiful suicidal cloud.  He knows how the pup is when he's not around and can't bear the thought of what he might endure if he were to actually go through with it.


Still he lies in bed, not counting sheep, but the options to which he can leave this world and find peace.  No, he's not scared or sad anymore; the tears are those of joy.  The thought, nay, the knowing that he could exit his misery at any given time empowers him, the Suicide Man.  He's stronger with that knowledge; the fear of death and the furthering of his illness subsides.  He doesn’t have to live in this world and do the things he does while in it but he chooses to.  Yes, this man has found enlightenment in suicide.  Strong, happy with tears in his eyes, he can't sleep.  He's going to wake up his dog for a late night walk.

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